现在有许多人迁往大城市 2．对于这种做法人们看法不一 3．我的观点 On the Trend of Moving to Big Cities __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________

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①There is a long tradition in most schools in the world, that is, to evaluate students with their academic achievement. With this tradition come a lot of problems.② For example, people find that it is not an unusual thing that many students who do well in academics seem to have poor performance in their daily life.Thus, controversy over the major concern of our education appears.
③Some people remark that the primary concern for receiving education is to enable people to earn a living. Therefore, the major emphasis in our education should be encouraging students to achieve academic success rather than anything else. ④ While other people insist that the cultivation of character should be the most important task in education. A lot of examples show that what our students lack most is not knowledge, but the basic principles of life. The cultivation of character can help them establish a beneficial value system and fulfill their self-discovery.
⑤In my opinion, our education should prepare our students for a way of life-by cultivating a set of principles that can affect all the students. Achievement in academic only represents success in a certain field, while the cultivation of character will influence every aspect of students lives and last for a life long time.
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①简要介绍当今的学校教育以学生获取知识为重点的现象。
②用一个具体事例说明这种教育模式存在很大缺陷。
③用Some people remark that…引出一部分人的观点。
④用While other people insist that…阐述另一些人的观点。
⑤阐述作者个人观点，并给出原因。
加分亮点：
controversy争议，热议
primary concern首要任务
major emphasis重中之重
serf-discovery自我认识
主题词汇：
academic performance 学习成绩
moral quality 道德品质
attach importance to 重视
personality 个性，品格
have a profound influence on 对……影 响深远
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1．It is a long practice in most school that students are evaluatedby their academic performance rather than personality．长期以来，学校都是以学生的学习成绩而不是品格来评估他们。
2．As far as I am concerned．our education should attach momimportance tocultivatingstudents’characterwhichhasaprofound influence on their future life．我认为，我们的教育应该更加重视培养学生的品格，这对他们的未来有着深远的影响。

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The Internet
In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society.With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work.We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet.
However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers.The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet.Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it.Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.

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Renting an Apartment off Campus Nowadays, an increasing number of college students would rather rent an apartment off campus than live in a dormitory. This phenomenon has raised considerable concern among parents and college faculties about living off campus, which is caused by the following reasons. To begin with, living conditions of an apartment off campus may be better than those of a dormitory. A rented apartment is often equipped with an independent washroom and a shower equipment which may be of great advantage over the school dormitory. In general, a typical dormitory often accomodates four or six, or even eight students and it is too crowded and noisy for those who prefer private space as well as quiet circumstances. In addition, instead of being regulated by dormitory rules, students may enjoy more freedom in a rented apartment. If college students intend to rent an apartment, I think they should give top priority to safety. It is important to make a survey of the surroundings first to ensure the security. Besides, when they tend to enjoy the freedom, they should have a better sense of self-control and make good use of their time.

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正确答案：My Views on Examinations In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently its side effects are also enormous. To begin with examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance a student is driven m memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. In fact few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students' academic development. If that is the case why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
My Views on Examinations In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous. To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven m memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students' academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?

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Renting an Apartment off Campus
Nowadays, an increasing number of college students would rather rent an apartment off campus than live in a dormitory.This phenomenon has raised considerable concern among parents and college faculties about living off campus, which is caused by the following reasons.
To begin with, living conditions of an apartment off campus may be better than those of a dormitory.A rented apartment is often equipped with an independent washroom and a shower equipment which may be of great advantage over the school dormitory.In general, a typical dormitory often accomodates four or six, or even eight students and it is too crowded and noisy for those who prefer private space as well as quiet circumstances.In addition, instead of being regulated by dormitory rules, students may enjoy more freedom in a rented apartment.
If college students intend to rent an apartment, I think they should give top priority to safety.It is important to make a survey of the surroundings first to ensure the security.Besides, when they tend to enjoy the freedom, they should have a better sense of self-control and make good use of their time

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Should Students Go Abroad to Study?
Nowadays, a growing number of students are planning to study abroad. However, people's opinions are sharply divided on this issue. For example, my friend James is studying in the USA and tells me about his overseas life and study. According to him, there are many advantages. Firstly, studying overseas forces him to cope with everything by himself, and broadens his horizons as well. Secondly, this experience is conducive to a better career path in that it has developed both his abilities and personality. Last but not least, many developed countries offer a relatively better education.
On the contrary, another friend of mine, Claire, never agrees with James. She claims that as we have never stepped on foreign lands, it is unwise to follow the trend blindly. Furthermore, the culture gap could not be ignored, which may create obstacles for cross-cultural communication. The more barriers one meets, the more discouraged one may become. In addition, the expenses are too high for most families.
As for me, I do not agree with either of them. With regard to James' opinion, I believe one's success lies in what one is striving for instead of where one is. I know some people who came back from abroad could not find a job while some others who received education at home have succeeded in their own fields. As for Claire's opinion, I don't think it is wise to reject everything before trying and gaining a whole picture of it. We should believe in ourselves in dealing with what we may encounter. Indecision about whether to study abroad makes no sense. What really counts is the determination at the time of decision and the willpower after that.